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Thursday, 1 June 2017

Exposition

Yesterday we had to write a exposition writing about should children work for there pocket money?. I really thought for a while for this one. But I had made my decision. If you want to you can read my work and leave me feedback and feed-forward. Enjoy!!

Should children work for their pocket money?

I prefer to work for my money. Firstly because it makes you work hard, then you will get good through it. Secondly you help around the house. Finally you will know how it's like having your own house. That's why I believe that yes we should work for our pocket money.

Firstly children need to work hard to get good out of it. If they work hard then they will know what hard work his and will know that everything you do, you put hard work into it. Then you will know that you are successful.

Secondly your parent’s won’t forever be there your life. So if you learn now how to clean, wash dishes and so on. Then you will have the gidus to knowing what your house will look like in the future. That’s why I believe that we should earn our pocket money.

Finally you have responsibilities in your life. You have to get yourself your own everything. But you will end-up thanking your parents because your parents made you do work around the house when you were younger. That’s why I feel that working hard is better than just getting money for no work.

In my opinion I strongly agree that we should work for our pocket money. Wouldn’t you think that hard work will make you feel good inside?.


7 comments:

  1. Hi I'm Amelia from O.I.S. This is a great persuasive piece of writing! You made some really good points about why children should work for their pocket money!

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  2. hi i'm summer from papakio school. i really like your bit of writing. I would work for money as well but i can't i just have to do it. what topic did you do it of?

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  3. hi i'm lena from papakaio school
    this is really good persuasive writing good job
    do you really think that you should work for it or did the teacher pick for you?

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  4. Hi Saphire, I'm Lilian from O.I.S and that was an awesome piece of writing just watch out for those spelling mistakes but other than that amazing work.

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  5. Hi Saphire. I'm Jorgia from Oamaru intermediate school. O.I.S.
    What an amazing piece of writing. I do agree that people should work hard to get pocket money and your parents won't always be there.
    Great work.(:

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  6. Hi Saphire. I'm Larissa from Oamaru intermediate school. What a great piece of writing. I love all your points and I agree with you. Amazing writing.

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  7. Kia ora Saphire I like how you know how to do exposition writing. What do think about writing

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