language features

This week we have been doing procedure writing. This is what I have been working on. If you want to be successful then you will have. Title, Subheadings ( What you need, materials or ingredients), bullet points, Steps (e.g Instructions) then to finish it off your final statement ( e.g there you have it you made your own homemade..... ). There its not that hard. Please show me how you go when you do your procedure writing.