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Wednesday, 15 June 2016

My chocolate family

Last week I learnt about metaphors. A metaphor is like an simile but you don't use "like" or "as", but you use "is" instead . We had to make a poem that describe's our families personality by using chocolates that suits them best. I hope you enjoy my poem.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Saphire I like your work about your chocolate family. Keep up the good work.

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  2. Hi Saphire, I really like the way you used your own opinion of vocab and I think you already have the heartwarming flow in there. Hey your blog post really reminds me of Christmas.

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  3. Hi Saphire, I really like the way you used your own opinion of vocab and I think you already have the heartwarming flow in there. Hey your blog post really reminds me of Christmas.

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  4. Hi saphire,
    my name is Yvette and i am form tautoro school and i think that's really funny that you said you family lives in a box of chocolate i see that you like Nike i do too and keep up the great work. blog you later.

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